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    Not bad at all.

    The reason I gave originality a low score is because you didn't write this song and aren't the first person to cover/remix it.

    I like the melodies, but it feels like the song never really goes anywhere. I have problems with buildup and anticipation as well, and it just leaves the listener disappointed.

    In my opinion, the lead should have been louder for a more dramatic effect, because that's where the real emotion is.

    Overall a nice piece here, but with a little more work and change (dynamics, etc.), it could be awesome.

    Everlasting-Elements responds:

    Dude. I was the person to make this song. My account was Chaoz-of-Yakuza, but I decided to make a new one in order to try out my new style of music. If it would prove it, I'll make a farewell song or something. A lot of people redid CFL and I just thought I should do a remix for my new account. Now then.

    I suck with build-ups, i know, but at least I tried right!?

    Well...I think you understand the songs emotion by telling me what to make louder, which mean, I pretty much made you feel what I felt, I hope.

    Thanks for the review man.

    Very nice.

    I love the retro feel to it. Maybe your bass line could be a bit louder, or the main synth a little quieter. Also, that glitchy sounding synth was a little too loud for me (But that could be just me).

    The slower, ambient part reminds me of the 90's haha - it's that voice! Really though, it sounds like something I might hear on late night radio (when they play the techno).

    I absolutely LOVE the pads during the slower part.

    Too bad you had to lower the quality to submit it because you can hear the difference. I hate that, they should have some leeway with the 4 Mb limit.

    Great job 5/5 :D

    Smad responds:

    Thanks for the awesome review. Yeah I had to lower the bitrate to about 96 :\
    It sounds way better in full quality, (email me at smad12@hotmail.com if you'd like the better version).
    I'll work on the bass and synth, I have new program now so I'll try and fix it, and take the ambient part out just to see how it sounds, (plus shorter song= better quality) :D.

    Woah.

    Wow, that was awesome. I LOVE the sound. It's great. It was beautiful, I just got a few comments.

    At the beginning (my favorite part), I just wish I wouldn't hear it go quiet at the parts where the warble stopped.

    Also, I didn't really like the one drumroll. I felt it sounded too out of place and it didn't lead up to much anyway.

    That's all I have to say. Otherwise, a grear piece here :)

    Smad responds:

    Ahh k, I hear what you mean, maybe I should have a little echoing there or something. Lol about that drumroll... I tried to use to introduce the bassline, so it wasn't so intrusive, maybe it was too loud and/or sharp...
    Anyway, thankx for the review :D I'm gunna check out yours. :)

    Very nice.

    There is a definite style and sound to this song. I quite enjoyed it, but the piano just sounded a little too honky to me. People have different ideas of what a good piano sounds like anyway. I liked all the different sounds. Nice string work. Great when the drum beat comes in. Keep 'em coming.

    nightvision responds:

    Thanks alot for the quick review snayk. Agreed, it's a little to honky for my liking as well. But thats okay, I plan to get better all the time, and this includes the quality of mixing my sounds.I love it when the drums come in too (and when they cut out).

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