Great stuff, guys :D
Nice collab, here. I loved every contribution to the overall flash. Well done ^_^
The only thing that bothered me (and it's not even a big thing) is when the song stops - it seemed kind of abrupt. A fade out might have worked better.
Other than that, I have no criticism. Smooth flash, and nice job with the main menu - Bios were a nice touch.
Awesome...
You are an extremely talented artist. I loved the visuals and overall atmosphere to this piece. It's obvious that your art is stronger than your animation, but that can be improved with time (and you did say this is old; maybe you've gotten better).
Great choices of music (hehe), but I feel like their transitions weren't very smooth. Of course, I'll take into account that this isn't a finished submission, but it's pretty good, and I'm sure with extra work it could be amazing. Kind of wished the beginning with my song lasted longer :P
I love the scene in space. The music worked perfectly with it; probably the most beautiful part in the film.
Overall an awesome work... It's too bad you're not planning on finishing it :(
Easily the best submission I've seen featuring my music :)
wow thanks! I'm a big fan of your work and after hearing it, I felt compelled to make the opening scene that would eventually become this. So thanks for inspiring me! I wish I could finish it, but I'm bogged down with other projects.
Hahaha! Nice, good fun.
Good use of the game "The Movies." I've yet to see a flash submission on NG using this game, so good job being the first I encounter (originality points +).
The best part about it is the vocals. I loved the humor, and the voices helped it quite a bit.
It got a little boring near the end, but still a very enjoyable movie.
Nice job :)
I got 2 more I need voiced over before I submit. Ones about a kid bitching because he got water instead of applejuice and the other is about the holocaust.
Sick.
Great job, I loved it. It was a little bit on the short side, but that didn't really matter.
Good choice of music; it worked very well (I loved the sync with the walking "thing"). I love your style, particularly the darker side of it (I didn't enjoy the look of the basketball player as much).
Perhaps the blood could have been a bit more realistic in the final shot, but these are all minor details anyway.
Fifened.
the boy was kinda stereotypical character. it took me little to design him heh...
im glad you liked it .
Hilarious!
Funny stuff, particularly N00bKing's entry. I would have voted to pass that alone. To be honest with you, I'm usually not very fond of collabs, as they're usually whipped together too quickly and therefore suffer when it comes to substance. Although I'm sure it still didn't take you much time to make this one, it's not bad at all.
Nice one.
I agree. :)
Nice, neat idea.
I liked it. Light-hearted humor. Not the kind of thing to hold my attention forever, but not bad at all.
You've got one main problem. You need to optimize audio so the filesize isn't so large. In your case, it's forgivable because the flash actually has some substance, but in the future I would suggest learning about audio optimization to make everything a little bit easier.
Thank you for your constructive critisism. This is the kind of review that I love to see! I will research more about file optimization.
Spelling and grammar.
It was pretty good for a first, however, if you can't make a movie with sound, you have to work a little harder on the dialogue. Some of what was said simply wasn't realistic. There were many spelling and grammatical errors as well.
The graphics were decent, and the story flowed well.
Despite my beef with all the typing, I am voting to protect.
O.k. I got you!
Thanks a lot for the help.
Much better than last time.
I blammed it last time because it was too short. You do have animating talent, and although this one was still a little on the small side, it was worth voting through in my opinion. Keep it up me likey.
Thx :D
lol
Good job. I thought it was very funny. Visually it wasn't special, but that doesn't matter. Sometimes you're better off with a simple look anyway. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed it a lot.
Thanks. yeah I agree the graphics could have been better. I'm still just a beginner at flash animation. but thanks for the review.
Good job.
This one stood out for me. I usually don't like clay movies here because most of them have bad stories or settings, etc, but yours was different. You used what is normally done with sticks and made it work with clay (and it worked very well). Lots of choices and good animation. Well done.
thank you, im glad you thought of it that way
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