I enjoyed it.
But you DEFINITELY need sound! It was well presented, but could have been SO much better with a little sound (not to mention an ending of some sort). It would really be great with the sound and the rest of the movie. Maybe before you release it, you could get one of your friends to do some voice acting (since you say you're no voice actor). On another note...the file size is a little bit high. The ideal thing would be the full movie (both parts in one file) with sound and a lower size, but I guess you can't have everything.