Score: 9

"Awesome animation and visuals."

submission: Pac-man 3D

date: March 4, 2007

You've got some top notch 3D animation going on here. I enjoyed the film very much, so I only have a few minor suggestions/problems.

The biggest flaw was in the sound. I think the song (Great choice with Aphex Twin, btw. Love it.) should have been louder or the sound effects quieter. Once in a while the sound effects would just sort of stop abruptly too.

That's basically all that I think needs to be improved. Other than that it was fantastic. You had my full, undivided attention.

Great job :)

Score: 6

"Decent."

submission: HomeRun!

date: March 3, 2007

The graphics/player animations were pretty good, and the idea was fine, but the controls lacked a bit.

When you jump you can't even swing, so how can you hit the higher balls? At first I could never make a homerun, but then I got the hang of it and it came easier. Unfortunately, sometimes it easier to hit the ball by simply holding the spacebar and standing still, which ruins the element of skill in the game.

The "HOMERUN!" announcement was kind of annoying, and the quality of sound wasn't very good.

You should have made it so that the music continues when you go from Training back to Menu. Also, you should have looped it so that when the song finishes, there isn't just silence. If not that, at least a Play/Stop button for music.

Overall a decent game, but nothing spectacular. There is lots of room for improvement.

P.S. I'd just like to mention that you used my song "in the meadow" without crediting me. I've sent you a PM, and I hope that you give me proper recognition soon :)

Score: 9

"Amazing."

submission: Animation Reel1

date: February 4, 2007

It is VERY clear that you have talent. Great drawings and animation. I think you made the perfect choice for music as well. It suited the piece very well.

There were a few parts I didn't enjoy as much, and I thought didn't fit as well as other parts; mainly the emo part; it was completely out of place, and the style of drawing wasn't the same at all. It wasn't a bad piece, but I felt like it interrupted the flow.

There were also parts that didn't have as good quality drawings/animation/detail as others, but they were still OK.

Great job overall. Keep it up :D

Score: 9

"Great."

submission: On The Moon (episode 10)

date: January 21, 2007

Awesome quality; amazing graphics, crisp sound with good voices.

The biggest problem was the humor. It was slightly funny at points, but it generally felt kind of dry.

Overall a great animation with high production values, but the script could have been better. Random humor can be good, but this was missing something.

Score: 9

"Hahaha! Nice, good fun."

submission: More Hardcore Than Pico

date: January 10, 2007

Good use of the game "The Movies." I've yet to see a flash submission on NG using this game, so good job being the first I encounter (originality points +).

The best part about it is the vocals. I loved the humor, and the voices helped it quite a bit.

It got a little boring near the end, but still a very enjoyable movie.

Nice job :)

Score: 6

"Great animation."

submission: A Transformation

date: November 5, 2006

Some of the best FBF animation I have seen. I really loved it. That said, it just wasn't enough to qualify as a complete submission. The total animation only lasts about five seconds; too short.

Unfortunately, I can't vote highly on this because of that. However, I'd love to see you work a little longer on a FBF. I know you have a short attention span and this is only an experiment, but a full submission would be great.

Score: 9

"Sick."

submission: Impulsive Mind

date: November 1, 2006

Great job, I loved it. It was a little bit on the short side, but that didn't really matter.

Good choice of music; it worked very well (I loved the sync with the walking "thing"). I love your style, particularly the darker side of it (I didn't enjoy the look of the basketball player as much).

Perhaps the blood could have been a bit more realistic in the final shot, but these are all minor details anyway.

Fifened.

Score: 10

"Awesome."

submission: The Atonement - Prologue

date: October 31, 2006

Great visuals - they really help create an atmosphere. The game was very playable; typical controls, but they work. Good stuff you've got here. Definitely front page material. Nice job getting it out in time for Halloween.

Score: 8

"Hilarious!"

submission: 50fps Collab

date: October 28, 2006

Funny stuff, particularly N00bKing's entry. I would have voted to pass that alone. To be honest with you, I'm usually not very fond of collabs, as they're usually whipped together too quickly and therefore suffer when it comes to substance. Although I'm sure it still didn't take you much time to make this one, it's not bad at all.

Nice one.

Score: 9

"Very funny!"

submission: Two co-workers and feces

date: October 28, 2006

It's been a while since I have laughed out loud at a flash here on NG (seriously), and I'm glad to have found this one.

The graphics could have used some improving, but for the most part, that didn't matter anyways. It's still fine as it is - the main graphic problem is lip sync. Sound was great (nice voice acting), but the actual quality was lacking a bit.

Office humor is hard to pull off, but you did a great job. Keep it up!